Lost in grief.
Eyes are the window to ones soul.
At present mine,
blackened, saddened.
In grief,
nearly shutting everyone,
everything out.
Clouds hang heavy,
This pain, weight I bear, such a loss.
Author notes
Credit of picture used to inspire words etc goes to ---
http://insomnia40977.deviantart.com/
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fantastic write. wonderful expression of your emotions.
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Excellent
Expression of great emotions and feelings of grief. I know to well and the feeling in imagery are great. I lost my son 7 months ago. I wish you the best and I'm sorry for your loss in your dog. Any loss is painful. If you need to talk just message me. Excellent poet you are and thank you for sharing with me.
Many Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
Thank you for reading my poetry and commenting for it means a lot to all of us.
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I am so sorry for your loss...a child would be so awful, to lose..but yes even a pet, a family member, it is hard.
Thank you for your kind thoughts and offer, and it's my pleasure for my comment
Cindy
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You lost one of your dogs...oh Cin, how sad, I have had it happen and its like losing your right arm, the smile you come home to each and every day. The face we love and loves us back so unconditionally. Hugs to you sweet girl. Love, C
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Yeaha is fucked ( scuse french ) lol
Thanks darl
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So very sad sweetheart. Anything that helps to ease the pain is a good thing. Best of luck in the contest.
Love you
Mum 
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Oh such a melancholy feel to this!! Beautifully done with such sadness... and a great take on that pic!
Wonderful sis!
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Thanks SiS
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ooooh... sensational take.
Best of luck this is a beauty.
Delila
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love this. LOVE IT. wow, thank you for this splendid write. it is so sad, and elegantly expressed. well done and best of luck to you.
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Thank you, your contest/pic, helped me to be able to express how I honestly feel right now, as we just recently lost on of our dogs.
Has been hard to get clear thoughts out, the pic, seemed to enable me too
So thank you
Cindy
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