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[ a glimpse of red ]

a glimpse of red
as the bugle blares
foxhunt

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  • marlene47 silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    Very nice. Now I get what you say about sense references. Nice ones with color and sound. Creates an extended image of all that goes on at a fox hunt.
    Marlene


  • azure85 gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Oh, that flash of red-such beautiful creatures they are. A very nice haiku Polly!


  • Odd Thomas
    April 16, 2008
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    very good haiku, thank you for entering and good luck