spring snowstorm-
april winds blow
cherry blossoms
A contest entry
- Super Haiku Contest (Round 1 of 3) by Odd Thomas.
330 points, ended April 16, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes, those blossoms are in drifts on my driveway.
Nice image you called up.
Marlene -
very nice, cherry blossom snow. Good haiku.
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Good to see you write. Hope all is well with you and yours. And oh how I love those blossom snows.
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WOW! This is beautiful, Bro! Love the alliteration in L1. Nice imagery all throughout and lovely aha moment.
All the best,
Char
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excellent haiku, very good "aha" moment, you have a real good understanding on how to write haiku and i thank you very much for entering my contest, it truly is an honor
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