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Forest Fire

glowing embers glide
through polluted smoky skies
green to black they die

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  • judy011
    April 17, 2008
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    very good


  • Odd Thomas
    April 16, 2008

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    very good haiku, i have nothing bad to say about this, excellent job, keep up the good writing and thank you for entering my contest and good luck


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    yay nate you entered