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Door to Door

Knock, knock
Who's there?
Nobody
Nobody who?
Nobody who wants to talk to you.

The door slams in my face, yet again
Prooving that even when I refuse
To answer a question,
I somehow still answer it wrong

I guess it's just a gift.

Knock, knock
Who's there?
Nobody
Nobody who?
Nobody who wants you.

Author notes

Written while listening to "How Far We've Come"

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  • liduen silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    nice knock knock thing I like the line "I guess it's just a gift" Nice poem!


  • LuckyBlackCat
    April 17, 2008

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    looooove it! "i believe the world is burning to the ground.." lol!


    • DeadlyTurnip
      April 17, 2008
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      ...Loveless videos?? wtf...oh lol that was my mom's idea, I'm not going 2 do that


  • Supa Fox
    April 17, 2008

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    What did you mean by refusing to answer a question, in the second stanza? I didn't really get that part. But I like the knock knock thing, it got me thinking about Stay on the Sunny Side or whatever it's called.


  • riasme
    April 17, 2008

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    brilliantly written :3 couldn't help laughing though because I saw something hilarious the other day about knock knock jokes x) I love the second stanza.

    lise

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