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I Just Want to Make You Smile.

Don't you understand
If you were to ever be mad at me
I dont know what I would do with myself
Because I just want to make you smile.

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Not my best, but they were just random thoughts that came to mind.

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  • Celticjedi
    April 24, 2008

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    Awww, I feel like that all the time. Here's to random thoughts usually revealing inner feelings. Great job Mishi, I really missed you. Hope you're doing well. Keep writing, love you tons.
    Hugs n kisses,
    Sakura