on the park bench
the laughter of childhood
skates by
A contest entry
- Super Haiku Contest (Round 1 of 3) by Odd Thomas.
330 points, ended April 16, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice image and contrast , complete with a soundtrack. Very nice entry.
Marlene -
Well done! I can certainly appreciate your words. They have great meaning within your piece. Good luck!
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Beautiful! A nostalgic moment captured superbly in sound...and words!! Best luck in the contest.
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very good haiku, i just hope i dont get too old too soon to be sitting on park benches watching kids skate by laughing wondering what happened to my own childhood, thank you for entering and good luck
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definitly seasonal!
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