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Just To Remind Me

Just a linger link between us
Emotions a stir

The wind explains our love for life
It explains us
It defies us

The sun warm and kind
Just as our love

A thrive between us
Joined with a kiss

A kiss of silk
Purity and peace

The clouds Calm and soft
As your skin

Long days became short hours
By your side
Along the fields of wonder 

Just as a season
Came our love

A great link amongst us
One that unites two

An attraction
Is born amongst us

Time was absent and seldom with you


Yet as we lay across the rivers of time 
We perceive the beauty of each other

Our spoken words converted to notes
Situations with a melody

A song
To remind me
I have you




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  • adsaige
    May 30, 2008

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    very soft spoken and light. it carries it's own personality, but i'm not sure if you've put the emotions i needed into this. this a very well written poem.