Just a linger link between us
Emotions a stir
The wind explains our love for life
It explains us
It defies us
The sun warm and kind
Just as our love
A thrive between us
Joined with a kiss
A kiss of silk
Purity and peace
The clouds Calm and soft
As your skin
Long days became short hours
By your side
Along the fields of wonder
Just as a season
Came our love
A great link amongst us
One that unites two
An attraction
Is born amongst us
Time was absent and seldom with you
Yet as we lay across the rivers of time
We perceive the beauty of each other
Our spoken words converted to notes
Situations with a melody
A song
To remind me
I have you
A contest entry
- vintage sunday by adsaige.
300 points, ended June 25, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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very soft spoken and light. it carries it's own personality, but i'm not sure if you've put the emotions i needed into this. this a very well written poem.

