a white birch woodlot
against blue sterling heavens
-working in springtime
Author notes
I was working at a very beautiful and peaceful place yesterday.
Painting: "Birches" by Gustav Klimt
In a list
A contest entry
- what happens in the white spaces by Dienush.
750 points, ended April 30, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Stunning images from so few words.
What an uplifting poem and stunning picture as well.
Becky
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Doesn't seem to match the picture but actually presents a better image in my mind. Nice Ku.
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Very creative painting chosen for this haiku prompt. Interesting take on this prompt for the contest.
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this is beautiful. I usually dont really care for haikus, but this works so well. Maybe I am a fan of the verbose
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This is very peaceful indeed... shows the beautiful side of working
It seems a bit wordy for a haiku, but the image is a nice one. Thank you for your entry.
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One of my flaws...I'm "wordy" even when I'm brief!
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Beautiful!
love it!
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Your words brought some peace to me after a very busy day. Good luck in the contest.
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It is nice to come across the right poem at the end of the day...I'm glad mine lifted you up a bit this evening, Papagallo!
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Sounds peaceful..well captured in your piece...
All the best!
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