Can you carry tears in your pocket?
Or your heart in a locket?
(For now, I’ll stop it…)
But I’m dying to know
Sometimes we say the darnest things
Our words go up as if with wings
(Then comes wisdom with the healing it brings…)
Who has the panacea “to go”?
Maybe souls pass like highway paths
Immersing in poetic baths
(Her kindness shields from drafts)
Play me a ballad maestro
Angels may pass by a flowers’ spontaneity
She writes from her soul…let it be
An ‘Angelflower’ has blossomed (by God’s decree)…
And these thankful fingers affixed a bow
In a list
A contest entry
- FAMILY AND FRIENDS ONLY PLEASE!!!!....INVITE ONLY! by Angelflower.
1100 points, ended April 20, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So beautiful and elegant. Great dedication to such a lovely lady. Filled with such tenderness and weaved with a touching and beautiful heart.
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I'm so glad that you enjoyed this and thank you deeply for the power of your thoughts about this. I felt a sharp spike of encouragement reading what you had to say about this; it was wonderful really.
AsIThink...
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Oh...lovely. A weave through thoughts, skirting nature in it's path. The whisping of a word-wind fluffing the petals of a flower friend in a dear caress. Of course Jet would love this. Very special and very nice...alby
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Thank you very much alby...this is a wonderful comment. Thanks for reading this. Your words (to me) add more flavor to this page...perhaps dulled by time's passing by? Wonderful feedback here...
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You're welcome. 'Twas a pleasure to read this...alby
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Great poem here bro. I think you did an outstanding job with this. The flow is great as usual and your words really grab the reader in. I'm sure the host of this contest loves it. Great job bro!
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My man, you never ever fail to fail to compliment me (even when it may not be due). And for this, I honestly thank you. I'm glad that you liked this. If you haven't already, check this writer out (she's good). And yeah, she loves this (lol).
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goodness!
I am witnessing a rebirth of an already created talent, and I must say I'm astounded by your ability to keep getting better!
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I thank God first...and thank you again and again. You have a why of helping to shape what's going on inside of me. This is part of your gift (no doubt). I'm aspiring to be a good writer...(I guess I do have aspirations after all...lol).
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See! You have people wanting you to write for them! And that isnt good enough to convince you that you are a terrific writer?! You are far too modest dear poet!
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My, my...look who's talking. Yeah, I really like your courage (to speak so frankly about how you feel). And I admire your tenacity and encouraging spirit. You are investing quite a bit in me. Thanks a million.
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Aww. this was so sweet. thank you.. You are a kind soul..
I have tons of pockets full of tears..and my locket got lost? lol.. sorry I'm not making fun or anything.. I really liked those lines.. But I really liked the WHOLE thing..
thank you very much.. I really loved it!.
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You are welcomed...a WHOLE lot. I'm very glad that you loved it. I was a bit skeptical...wondered. And wondered...then posted it. Thanks for the invite here. You offer such encouraging comments and support it was a pleasure to write it...
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