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Out Of My Reach

I feel so near to you
As if we are connected
And come together as one
I feel like I can trust you
With everything
I know we are great friends
But I want so much more than that
I know you don’t
And that’s why
You are always out of my reach

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  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    April 17, 2008
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    ahhhhh.....i love ur poem...jeje....is it about dave...jk


  • shannon.green
    April 16, 2008

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    Gorgeous. You explained it well and had good word choice. In life, some things are always out of reach, but we have to try right?
    love it.
    shannon