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Ashen Palace



Dark gray shadows lounge across the round surface...
    a pale sphere in the midst of an ink black sky.

        Mountains and rock jut out from this hell like... icicles,
  daggers form towers whereas bowls shape deep planes
    on the smallish speckle; in the bridge of the sky.

  Acid air so slimy and thick... clings to the horizon,
      tinting the moonless sky a thick cold gray,
never changing even as the sun revolves...  and day breaks
          through the sky like glass, and shards fall as black rain
    on this nameless place, lifeless... palace to only the leaden.


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  • HiddenByTheDark
    July 23, 2008
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    no exactly what i was looking for but a good poem...

    ♥always Kate