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Never Forget

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reminding quote, former life
teardrops bloom flowers

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  • jscribbled
    August 17, 2008
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    wait, I can see "teardrops bloom flowers" thats beautiful, but I can't get the first line.


  • Odd Thomas
    April 16, 2008

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    the only thing i would have to worry about htis haiku is the last line because you cant actually see flowers blooming from tear drops, but the first two lines are excellent, thank you for entering my contest


  • Sahlili20
    April 16, 2008

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    "teardrops bloom flowers"
    I loved this. It put a vivid, clear image in my head. This is a beautiful haiku, good luck in the contest!