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here I lay

never once
did his mouth
stop speaking

and never
did anyone
care to listen

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  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    April 24, 2008

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    Wow. As an epitaph, this is amazing. I can see it on a gravestone. It's good! Should've won something, methinks...


  • tarcus
    April 17, 2008
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    Should have shouted louder