Not everyone is talented
when it comes to painting paints
Especially with water colors
they always seem to stain
they drip
they bleed
they blend right in
To become the blocthes and blurs of life
and The colors that just fade away...
Fuesed in feelings of feverish passion
Cursed by youthful words and thoughts
but when you hear the words of the heart
everything just stops
and takes a time to listen
to watch
the blending of two cohesive souls
the perfect picture moment
of water colors colliding
Author notes
For me......the first time I said "I love you"...it seem like everything just fades away and everything in front of me became nothing more than blurs.
In art...Water Colors are some of the hardest type of mediums to use. Not everyone is good at it and that is why many people can not stand to use water color paints. They are harder to control and harder to manage because they are constantly blending and bleeding.
Like water colors...Love can be hard to control, but with some pratice and determention you can paint a beautiful picture.
Username: Bloved
A contest entry
- Saying "I Love You" for the first time... by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended April 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Smile upon this wonderful day by only1love4ever.
340 points, ended May 1, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice would be lovely?
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
I loved the imagery you used in this. Great job
-
to watch
the blending of two cohesive souls
the perfect picture moment
of water colors colliding
beautiful good luck in the contest
-
Only1love4ever-Reply
This is absolutely gorgous. You made a good point in your author notes. Watercolors are extremely difficult to use. In art class I made a spectacular mess, of course the teacher wasn't satisfied, but at least I tried. Hah :] Love is uncontrollable! You just go with the flow and make the best at it. As you said with a little practice and determination, you can paint a beautiful picture/a wonderful life!
Thankyou and good luck! Have a great day!
~Only1love4ever -
Enchanting. Great job.
-
Wow beautiful! Loved the imagery adn the author ntoes compliment this piece sooo well
My favorite lines:
the blending of two cohesive souls
the perfect picture moment
-
-
thanks sooo much. I just finished a painting using water colors...it came out pretty good but was a pain in the ass too use
. So I figured using water colors is like love...nice effect but a struggle.
Glad you liked it
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
