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Eternal Quilt

On the barren ground
Winter embraces the dead
Cold, Eternal Quilt

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  • Odd Thomas
    April 16, 2008

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    in haiku you dont need to use capital letters, but you really need to work on line 2, you dont need to use words that replace others like that, you have to be more blunt


    • twaintwine
      April 17, 2008
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      Basho Speaks

      One who knows nothing
      ought not speak of expertise
      in his drought of thought.