look paths just for you open anew.
Take the one you want the most,
You no longer are held back by ghost.
The demons of your past once held your fate,
But now it is you who has the key to that gate.
Go forth now and feel free,
For you are your self and the world is ready to see.
A contest entry
- Freedom of fate by phantomwriter.
450 points, ended April 23, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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this is a cool pep talk kind of poem. i think the end gives empowerment... i wonder if there is an underlying current that implys the freedom that isnt really free.... any way its nice to think about it that way like a mother sending a child out to play but watching to make sure they play nice... good wright
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Very rhythmic, and good rhymes. I like the message also, very fitting with the prompt. Good luck!
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