Drag me into sunlight
So i can see it so bright
For wind does blow
and the Grass does grow
But i really dont see the light.
I want to take your oppinion
of how you might say
that love is grace
and food is lace
But i just dont go that way.
I think your essence is strong
I dont thing belong
Standing out is good.
I stood there looking bare
And how the sun wares
That beautiful silouete
Of clouds and they how they set
And the time and how ticks
and the phone and how it rings
bells charm me threw internity
Loving every site of hope and dream
Your love means everything.
Yes. Your loves is my hope and everything
Thank god, You live near me.
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wow... ok so, pretty much you're 11 years old and you write amazing stuff. I love this poem. its really good and the rhyming is pretty much perfect. I love the flow of it too!
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Lol Thank you so much im commenting on this now cause im like going through al my old stuff cause i havent been on since like may sometime o.o i got so many stuff to put up lmao
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Great! : )
A very inspirational poem!
I like the rhyming pattern in it, and how the rhyme seems so natural.
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