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Plop

Underneath
    the
cold grey
metal of the
bathroom tap
    A
  tiny
little
droplet
of cold
water
h
  a
  n
    g
    s


ready to
  f

  a


  l



  l

  i
  n
    t
the\\o//water
with a full
and satisfying

    PLOP

Author notes

Plop: the sound made by an object dropping into water wihout a splash/to fall or be placed heavily or carelessly.
I laughed and laughed when I saw my word.
My first shape poem for a while (it looks fine in the text box but will probably turn out awful as soon as I press submit!)

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  • Cannonsfire
    April 18, 2008
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    lol I get it...plop!!! And it didn't kerplunk! Love, C