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Carnations

Seeing those pretty pink flowers should make me smile
but oh
all i see is a sad scene

one thursday,
one week,
of one december,
with rainy, wet weather
but plenty of snow on the ground

standing in the field,
the field of sadness
of tall, dark, graves
of the fallen,
the lost,
the old

one-by-one,
carnations are places gently
upon the grave
of our lost loved one

i step up
place my carnation down

rain
steaking
down
my
face

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