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Missing you more each day

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 21, 2008

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    Simple and beautiful. thanks for entering. Loved this:
    The day after tomorrow,
    You will be some where else.

    But The day after tomorrow,
    Is the day closet to you...

  • codypima
    April 17, 2008
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    Nice

    I like this one it is simple but it is also elegant


  • look for tomorrow
    April 17, 2008
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    WOW. good job


  • Short but cute
    April 17, 2008
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    I like this poem alot. Really beautiful


  • Perception
    April 16, 2008

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    Very interesting poem... It really left me thinking...

    Plus, it's easy to relate to... Missing someone... Everyone does


  • cjjc0
    April 16, 2008
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    i like the metaphore that goes throughout....nice

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