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Sonnet #3

To see you love me   
Is to feel afloat   
To hear you kiss me   
Makes me smile and boast   
Being with you is better than Paris   
As I drown in the ocean of your eyes   
Then sail upon a sail in abyss   
I pray we never say our goodbyes   

Could you spend, my love, eternity   
Loving only one heart   
Holding each other forever closely   
Our love be like natures art   
Let us be divine   
As you toxicate me with your wine   

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  • joeybueno gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    nice

    great job. I love the comparison to paris.