I am not beautiful
I am not perfect
I am not flawless
I am not lovely
I am not gorgeous
I am not the "experianced" girl
I am not gonna say I love you, just because you do
But most of all
I am not going to hurt you
I am not going to make you cry
I am not going to let you think I don't love you
I am not going to push you away
I am not going to give up with out a fight
I am not going to not give us a fighting chance
As long as you love me, these are the things I am not
*ish in love*
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you are
perfect as the sun sets you are my everything and even if you do push away im not going anywhere
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Excellent! I like how you wrote this
to someone you love
with the first stanza being pessimistic about yourself
and the second stanza optimistic about yourself;
most of the lines begin with 'I am not'
and this kind of repetition didn't even ruin the flow here!
well, your simple write is wonderful, I must say ^^
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