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Hemophilic

With lips deep stained
And cursed whispers in the veins
She cannot ignore the calling

A thirst for life
Craving for the red
So full on life
Yet so dead

Mesmerizing the beat
That compels the mind
And moves the feet
The thumping heart is enthralling

The heart of mankind

She wants to escape this
Heartless this rapists
But a fool she is to resist
That which makes her exist

Two thin red lines

But through the holes
Flows more then feed
A little piece of soul
And a particle of humanity
So fragile to hold
One day, she’ll have all she needs
To make her whole

A sliver of divine

Until then
She’ll continue feeding
Slave to her skin
As it is more needing
How can she win?
When she can’t stop bleeding

Author notes

there is always a motivation, there always a compromise, but things are not always as they seem. enjoy.

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  • Violent Serenity
    April 16, 2008

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    wow i love the flow of this piece, very soft but a current of something else running through... great work, keep it up! good luck in the contest ^.^