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Lost Friends

Some friends you lose and never come back
Some friends you want to lose
But they stick to you like glue
Some friends you lose
Then one day
There they are
As if by magic
Poof you found them
Everything has changed
You’re all grown up
You have kids
You’re married
Wow you live in another state
But nothing has changed
You still feel like those kids
The ones in the park
The ones walking home from school
You still hear the giggles
See the smiles
Feel the pain
Sleepovers, bike rides, arcades, malls
We did it all
Now as adults
Still B.F.F.’s
We can never be lost again

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  • thepoetsings
    August 3, 2008
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    I sort of felt like this was lacking in content...I did like the juxtaposition you created ("everything has changed...nothing has changed") but I would have liked to see more substance. I also thought the ending could have been a bit stronger; it ended up sounding a bit cliche


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 26, 2008

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    Wow this poem is just great. Friends are good to have around. this is very cute and very well written. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck


  • MusicMattnessLives
    April 22, 2008

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    wow. that was way cool. so blunt but in a good way. you truly conveyed what friendship is. i thought it was amazing. hey, i'm mostly speechless. sorry for the short comment. good luck and good write.

  • Catacia
    April 16, 2008
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    awesome

    best bff poem i've read