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return alone

face the dawn with sleepless hope
for another day of prayer and the
wings of sweet morning light

return silently alone to read the
moss etched stone with all reverence
for the death of a caring soul and
the tears of another world

close your eyes to the corruption
of this world and surround it with
a fairy forest of new creation

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piture prompt by cosmosue
http://cosmosue.deviantart.com/art/When-We-re-Gone-38453900

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  • buffsab99
    April 16, 2008
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    Excellent

    Great take on this prompt. Great write about loss and hope


  • aboomer silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    I like the wording and images in this. I really like your last line,
    'a fairy forest of new creation'.
    thank you for your entry
    best wishes