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sweet aroma(haiku)

the sweet smell of you
breathing deeper everytime
captivating me

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haiku

A contest entry

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    April 24, 2008
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    Wow... this is a beautiful haiku...


  • lovemedeath
    April 23, 2008
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    i like it!!!!!


  • Justmenow
    April 21, 2008

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    beautiful

    a beautiful haiku i love it, i wish i could write like this really well done

    congrats and keep writing


  • liquidmindforever
    April 17, 2008
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    Dear Poet,
    Thank you for entering my contest HAIKU & SENRYU.
    Please indicate in Author's notes whether this is
    Haiku or Senryu.
    You call it your "1st haiku" however, rules require
    you place "senryu" or "Haiku" in AN.
    IM when you've done so and let me know title so I can read.

    Thanks agains for entering

    Blessings of peace
    liquid


  • Perception
    April 16, 2008

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    ooo... Nice haiku... It puts a great image into my head... "the sweet smell of you/breathing deeper everytime"
    Very interesting idea here...
    Wonderfully penned,
    Great job and good luck in your contest

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