Spring
you left this very morning
I cried and said goodbye
you promised me you'll return alive
Summer
I keep your letters close
when I sleep they lay near
so I can pretend your voice I hear
Autumn
You are still gone
I am alone
Waiting for you to come home
Winter
My days are cold and lonely
For the visit I received today
Told me you'd been buried far away
Author notes
lovelight05
A contest entry
- Picture prompt; 10 entries, I NEED 3 MORE PLEASE ENTER!! by perfectsunset.
380 points, ended May 6, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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Excellent thoughts and ideas expressed in your poem. Great rhyme scheme and flow as well. The imagery really stands out and shines through your words, bringing a new light to the picture. Thank you for your beautiful entry & best of luck

