My money its gone where could it be.
Unless I find it moms gonna kill me.
Got to look everywhere got to retrace my steps.
Got to figure a way out of this mess.
Everywhere i look there isnt a trace.
Rather I didnt look at the smile on that hobo's face.
A contest entry
- ALMOST ANYTHING GOES by VerminVomit.
303 points, ended May 5, 2008, 47 entries
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its no good but im having writers block
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having no money is bliss sometimes . . good write . . !!
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i like it
THE HOBO STOLE IT, EVIL HOBO *STABS HOBO AND LAUGHS TRIMUPHANTLY*
i really like it
the last line is my fave
overall...really awesome -
i see....
I like it we all have that fear of our moms somewhere in us lol it was good
Brittany
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The hobo is more of a pocket picker than a mugger because a mugger is a person who comes up to you with a gun or knife and forces you to give them money. But anyways this poem was short and very random but that's ok cause I love reading random poems and I love doing random stuff
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I had a chuckle with this
The lines were fit for the theme to flow well
in this simple write ^^
Ah, the wonders of losing money, hehe n.n
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