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Tempting the Dead

Prey do not wake me as I slumber in the earth,
I do not know what hell may come with me,
Know that.....
For dark things slumber with me in this grave,
Rotting things with dreams of desication,
With me they lurk...
We may just rise to take the throne of the living,
Cast the world into a thousand years of darkness,
We agents of decay...
Rise up my brethren our time to shine black is nigh,
Come forth old and forgotten lords of decreptitude,
Our reign beckons....
The world hungers for our putrid moldering flesh,
It dreams of our languor and seething petrification,
Longs for doom....
Taste our fetid breath and know the beauty in rot,
Welcome to the mausileum we remake the world,
At long last....
We are fate undenied join us and know victory,
A timeless curse that now cannot be arrested,
Join us at last....
Submit or we will gnaw on your drying bones,
Make our war drums with your flayed skins,
Time wont wait....
Best left sleeping but we waited long enough.

Author notes

like the saying goes: leave sleeping dogs lie......

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  • This is such a truly incredible piece of dark depth.. There is an intensity of description which just resonates throughout. Excellent imagery to allow a greater depth within. Great write!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    YAY for gold
    *throws confetti on you*
    Soooo deserved!


  • subliminal girl
    April 16, 2008

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    Dark wonderful write... great job on giving a glance at what may be approaching and happen to the earth and all human kind... Paints fateful images and adds to the impression that there's something in the air... fits the picture very well. Best of luck to you in the contest!


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Darkness at its best! I love it!!! Muahhhhhh!!! You are the Dark Lord sir...thanks for the entry and best of luck!!!


    Az


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Holy crap!!!!!!! That was AWESOME!!

    You got all up inside that picture and brought the doom!!

    Fantastic my Dark Lord... you have nailed this picture to the wall!!

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