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Vent



Breath rushes, in steamy gasps
through cobwebbed nose;
In withering, the form finds
resurrection -
capsuled.

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15 words Prompt "Pressure Cooker"

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  • Carly Pop gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    thanks for entering. Really good take on the prompt!


  • Perception
    April 16, 2008

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    wow.... I love these lines.... So full with imagery, and great words... I really love what you painted in my mind... A very... unique picture --- wonderfully captured.

    Great job