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Fountain of Dreams[of late,of course]

Every day I anticipate
sound sleep
and somehow I can never embrace it.
Reasons are many to cite
but the odd events that I, solely  come across
in my daily walks of life disturb my designed schedules.

Of late that sour times had a hard beat
now I am able to visualize many incidents
through the streams of my dreams,relating to living styles
and all those advocate me the necessity to be humane, at all times

I am now a changed man am very well , recognized as
fountain head of kindness ,in dreams and realties too
of late,of course

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Fountain of Dreams
-Super Smash Bro. Melee Soundtrack

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  • notorious gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    "Select one of the following titles and let that inspire you."

    I'm pretty sure that this made it pretty clear that you had to actually USE the title as your well, title for the fourth option. For an entry to actually be considered to be a finalist, you have to follow the rules. Please send me a message or reply to this comment if you decide to change the title to 'Fountain of Dreams'. You could of course incorporate both titles--the one you thought of and the one you were told to use.

    "advocate me the necessity to be humane" My favorite line.

    Thanks for entering, and good luck.