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First Love

You walked into my heart
Filling it full of kindness
It's held tight
Just by one simple kiss

And when your lost
I'll miss you so much
Every heart beat
And every touch

I'll never forget this
Your love for me
Your my first true love
And maybe again, my love to be

I'm wanting you back
I always will
Just to let you know
I'm missing you still

Are u in Love?

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  • Walk-Free
    May 2, 2008

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    Lovely poem, hon

    Though it's a little cliche, you did well potraying your emotions of missing that special someone.

    Please put the option in your notes please (:

    Best of luck


  • t-w-s
    April 16, 2008
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    who is this for... becuase im not going nor have i gone anywhere and you say you miss the love?