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Bursts



Heavenly soul
mind in hell
pushing virtues
confronting evils
palpitations quacking
thoughts pressure..

Whistling..Bursting.















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~spiritualangel~

Prompt: PRESSURE COOKER

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 17, 2008
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    Yes, this speaks volumes and more...congrats on the Gold and the poemlol


  • Carly Pop gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Wow! Great take on the prompt! thanks for entering