Boiling over,
steam splashing insides,
till your words
cave safety valve in
brimming out emotions.
Author notes
Prompt- pressure cooker
In a list
A contest entry
- quickie by Carly Pop.
300 points, ended April 17, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good imagery.
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I love your take on the prompt and know the feeling well.
Best wishes in the contest.
Margaret
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Thank you for your wishes
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Very good
Too many of us need to check our gages , for when it comes close to the boiing point...mac
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They sure do....thanks
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thanks for your entry! Great take on the prompt!
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Great take on the prompt
and the lines gave a nice depth
to the prompt, too ^^
good luck in the contest!
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