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kiss

Point your lashes down
and you can see my face
  I'm smiling
Open you mouth speak with your
heart and you can see my soul
I'm waiting
Place your arms around my waist
and you can embrace my uncertainty
I'm shaking
Press your lips against mine
and try to catch me
I'm falling

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  • only1love4ever
    April 17, 2008

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    Sweet

    This is a great poem. I really enjoyed it. You must be in love?? I think thats great. Hope that you enjoy allpoetry. It is a wonderful site!!


  • demonic66
    April 16, 2008
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    nice


  • Lost Emo
    April 16, 2008
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    another great poem with very gd imagery again. gd write


  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    April 16, 2008

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    FABULICUOS

    This is fantastic! Is it tru? well, it makes me wanna talk to my bf!! lol... he has never kissed me!


  • wolfpuppy
    April 16, 2008
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    nice wrie babe

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