anxiety stormed
but he wanted an answer
my tear was a drool
I let it fester until it was sugar
emotion turned it like right meal
ironically tiny font but message
tune of birth permeated my memory,
under guise of gauze
nurse quieted my summery song
for sake of child with silenced mamma
and shouts of hospital obviously no house,
I now watched someone do legal love
more than border read to smile nature
two emotions, tell me how to get them both right
or help sort of like you delete
in leave through doors as arms
of eraser cushion
the way understanding was addressed in autumn,
I hear a phone call not only the wind
it's not as lonely to even hear hurt now
I love it and I want to tell you
in the tropics of personality
no attacker but caretaker
a new correlation
as watching those with food by purpose in spring
neither erred delivery nor miscarriage flowers simply before me
as when you touch saxaphone of going to sleep
good night is music when readiness
isn't sad but had enough lullaby you can be alone now
funny alive
Author notes
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good luck is like dropped food in stomach that's equivalent to on floor to me; Isaiah 65:11
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but NO applause symbol look caricatures, thank you
A contest entry
- Picture prompt; 10 entries, I NEED 3 MORE PLEASE ENTER!! by perfectsunset.
380 points, ended May 6, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
abrupt parts may need editing
Comments
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Thank you, & you are welcome
I am glad you were inspired and I am glad you entered such an amazing write in my contest. keep writing!
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Beautifully written, loaded with imagery, metaphor, and depth. I really enjoyed this piece & these lines especially
"anxiety stormed
but he wanted an answer
my tear was a drool
I let it fester until it was sugar"
Thanks for your lovely entry & best of luck
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your quote is what generated me to write, great
bella-babie quite catchy reminder
thank you for your nice touch of listing fine elements making enjoyment. I am honored by you validation with honorable mention, especially by addition that didn't get carried away it seems.
I appreciated your look finding my write as something to compliment, but good luck can be a counterpoint.
this was an important effort within standards,
babies are my subject
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