Take it out like a switchblade, baby
You know it hurts like a heart attack, honey
you feel that aching and it's all for me
So pick up the scissors
and cut me out something pretty, girl
You know the game,
you've done all this before
I swear gorgeous,
I won't treat it like they did
But I'm just a liar and it won't be the same
when I get through with it
It's just your heart
Watcha need it for?
Author notes
Those words at best were worse than teenage poetry
A contest entry
- "Those words at best were worse than teenage poetry" Inspired by lyrics by Lauren Noir.
550 points, ended May 4, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1708 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is a song that my band does :)
Comments
-
Wow! Your band does it!
that must be awesome, TBS are 'mazing, like
I loved the way you took it from the lyrics, it was so clever, not too explicit. Just beautiful
Yep, I liked this. Liked it a lot.
Lots and lots
I liked the idea of hurt, maybe the scissors were cliche, but it worked
Well done
Good luck
And thank you
Adding your comment:
