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In Between

Caught
contemplating

little girl
lost between two worlds

one wants to
play

the other,
date.

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Pic inspired
pic by John Rosse

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  • poppa
    April 17, 2008
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    Lovely write....we did have a similar take on this prompt.....well done..


  • Kiddy
    April 16, 2008

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    Haa..it reflects right mood of young girls that would always have...
    Good one...
    Love
    -Kiddy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 16, 2008
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    So cute and sincerely creative... x


  • Arizona Sunset
    April 16, 2008

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    sometimes it is hard for a girl to be stuck in this place....excellent poem! best to you in the contest~ Trisha~