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Lost Angel

Sitting all alone,
On a pier full of doubt.
Never thought I'd be here,
Looking for a way out.
Dangling my feet,
In a lake full of torment.
Bitter pain and sweet surrender,
Are my only scent.
My wings once white,
Now completly black.
An inocent angel,
Fallen off track.
Lost in a world,
That I can't see.
A place full of struggle,
That I don't want to be.
Dazing down,
Letting it all sink in.
My thoughts erupt,
&& my world begins to spin.
Borken and torn,
I put it all aside.
Jump in the water,
To forever hide.

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[xsaphicxbutterflyx;; april showers bring may flowers]

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    May 12, 2008

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    This is very good. I like the flow, and it's just creative. THanks for entering and being pateint.


  • ConvenientExcuses
    April 17, 2008

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    "Dangling my feet,
    In a lake full of torment."

    "Jump in the water,
    To forever hide."

    This is amazing. I love it! It flowed great, and the imagery was awesome. Well done! I hope you do well in the contest! =]