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Daughter of Achelous

I’m drawn to these towering cliffs so oft,
awaiting tall ships that rise from the sea.
Enchanting the seamen with voice so soft,
I lull them to sleep before they can flee.

I capture their souls with mystical song,
alluring their hearts with beauty and grace.
They fall at my feet, to where  they belong,
crawling on bellies to gaze at my face.

The feelings I have of beauty and lust,
an immortal goddess using my pow’r,
o’er unwary men that value my trust;
those helpless young seamen that I devour.

For the love of my song and my controls,
I am blessed with these men and their dead souls.

 

 



 

Author notes

Seamen who sailed near were decoyed with the Sirens' enchanting music to shipwreck on the rocky coast, and the Sirens devoured them. Odysseus was curious as to what the Sirens sounded like, so he had all his sailors plug their ears with beeswax and tied him to the mast. He ordered his men to leave him tied to the mast, no matter how much he would beg.

The Sirens (Acheloides) were daughters of the river-god Achelous and a Muse. They had been nymphs and playmates of Persephone, and for not protecting her when she was carried off by Pluto, they were transformed into beings half-woman and chalf-bird by Demeter. Later they were transformed into half-woman and half-fish.

Calypso was a nymph, the daughter of the Titan Atlas. In Greek mythology, Calypso was a sea nymph who inhabited the island of Ogygia. After the last of Odysseus' men had perished at sea, she waylaid the homeward-bound Odysseus. Odysseus himself was washed ashore on Ogygia, where Calypso became enamored of him, taking him as her lover and promising him immortality if he would stay with her. Odysseus refused her offer, wishing to return home to Ithaca and to his wife, Penelope. But Calypso refused to let him leave, and held him prisoner for seven years. Finally Athena complained of Odysseus' plight to Zeus, and Zeus sent Hermes to Ogygia to order Calypso to set Odysseus free. Calypso complied reluctantly, allowing Odysseus to construct a small boat and set sail from the island.
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  • Ellis gold member
    February 8
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    Holy mistrust. Think I'll just stay away from the sea altogether!


  • Tirrell
    December 28, 2008

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    Into the vaults of tarterus they will go, and this is a marvelous darkly write, in tone and form it has me enchanted with its voice.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    Excellent Sonnet

    Closing couplet wraps it all up tight. Nice sonnet and spot on to the contest specs. Thank you for a delightful tale and most enjoyable read. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • just mercedes gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    This is a good sonnet and explores poetically the relationship between men and sirens, along with a fascinating recap of the mythology involved. A very dark vision, of being blessed by dead souls!


  • Ithica silver member
    April 23, 2008

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    Now you remind me of Eusebius and his penchant for dark lore... This is a fantastc Sonnet and a lesson rolled into one!!!


  • jo-el
    April 19, 2008

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    you really shine with these stories. myths and so forth are always made even more interestin when i read your interpretation. well done.


  • Faeryn
    April 16, 2008

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    Lol, now I don't need to study for part of my Greek Mythology test. You've summerized what the book says in 1 lovely sonnet. Great Job!
    Love,
    Tay


  • JohnnyD gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Hey, this was quite the little write here you had Cubbie dear, Greek Mythology and rhyme,
    what else could man need for a better time?
    Those Greek and Crete gals were hot stuff, still are.
    had a girfriend in Santorini, but she got blown away



    Odysseus, he and I shared curiosity ,audacity and Calpyso...and then two million units of Penicillin
    G



    dad


  • And Hyetal
    April 16, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem! I love what inspired it... I have a thing for Greek mythology.

    Another wonderful write from you.

    ~Cassie


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Briliiant

    A Sonnet Masterpiece
    Love this write...love every word and stanza
    Enough said
    Wish you the best in the contest

    Much love,
    Many blessings
    David


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Very enchanting write dear Amera, and I suspect you were a siren in a past life. Best of luck in the contest.


    Love and peace always,
    mj.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 16, 2008
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    Amazing Indeed..the content and the impact is just imprssive..well done...


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    the mermaid sat on the rocks off the shore
    And she sang me her song of the sea
    The beauty she sang travelled straight to my core
    The mermaid was calling to me

    But I wasn't lost to the call that she made
    I knew that the rocks led to grief
    A call for a chopper the trump card I played
    And winched her straight off from the reef


  • PerVirtuous
    April 16, 2008

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    This is beautiful, and not only that, it is a psychologically accurate representation of the type. Excellently penned. Kudos and standing ovations.


  • RedAquarius
    April 16, 2008
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    Really nifty write, Am. I love when you delve into mythology and pen us a gift.


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Y'know, Sis, I'd like to see this done some other way than a sonnet - but nevertheless this is pretty good. I hope it does well in the contest.


    • Amera gold member
      April 16, 2008
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      What's wrong Sis? Don't you like my sonnets?

      • Mairi bheag gold member
        April 16, 2008
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        I love them!

        No, look for the positive, not the negative in my comments.

        I have done many a sonnet myself where the object was narrative, but I am coming round to the conclusion that a narrative is better expressed some other way. It gives the story-telling more of a free rein. C'est tout.

  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    Proper comment has to wait until I either get my own entry in or I give up, Lane can come back and collect this bloody wall she left lying around!!!!


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    April 16, 2008

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    ur gonna blow my mind off sometime soon with these spectacular poems wooow this this is fabulous i liked it how u put the story into a sonnnet im ur #1 fan sis(L)(L)


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    This is such a great write. I love hearing about greek mythology. It always captivates me and you have written this so well. Great work.


  • painfully amazing
    April 16, 2008
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    wow. this is deep =] amazing writ

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