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Fluttering Into You

Divulged of my inner most frustrations.
Backed by your willingness to give.
I've purchased my ticket of travel,
I won't return to where once I have lived.

For a long time you've held open arms.
Well now they will surely pay off,
For I am longingly wanting-
to change this sign on my bus.

Once heading downtown in quick time
needing a blockage of sorts
you were the only enticement
causing my path to abort.

Now I am lovingly arrested
by the beauty and value of you.
You've got your time so invested,
I threw out the keys and withdrew.

All that I had was now rubbish
floating on papers of steel
but I won't think of them ever,
if you keep me close; seal the deal.

Author notes

Song Lyrics for Option C

The Reason by Hoobastank

I'm not a perfect person
There's many things I wish I didn't do
But I continue learning
I never meant to do those things to you
And so I have to say before I go
That I just want you to know

I've found out a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
and the reason is you

I'm sorry that I hurt you
It's something I must live with everyday
And all the pain I put you through
I wish that I could take it all away
And be the one who catches all your tears
Thats why i need you to hear

I've found out a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
and the reason is You

and the reason is You [x3]

I'm not a perfect person
I never meant to do those things to you
And so I have to say before I go
That I just want you to know

I've found out a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
and the reason is you

I've found a reason to show
A side of me you didn't know
A reason for all that I do
And the reason is you



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  • RainbowGirl257
    May 2, 2008

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    the penultimate stanza really stuck in my mind, "lovingly arrested." this is a beautiful poem. thanks for entering and good luck


  • Abson
    April 16, 2008

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    A LOVELY PIECE PP!!!

    This is a lovely and enjoyable piece of free style poem that gives the reader an insight into the theme.I admire the clarity of the wording and the uniqueness associated with your tone in this poem.


  • SandraMVeinot
    April 16, 2008
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    enjoyed the read..


  • individuality gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    it is a rocky road sometimes travelled but we get there in the end and love can breathe, a good piece here

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