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daydream generation

Adolesocent exploits envisioned
behind youthful eyes

entrancing thought process
of progessing uncertainity -

maturity conspires...

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  • moluv10
    April 17, 2008
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    I'm feeling this piece bro. Great word useage as usual. Love the concept here. Keep it up bro.


  • Meme Wheeler
    April 16, 2008
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    This is extremely deep and thought provoking.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 16, 2008
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    You certainly come up with deep and meaningful pieces within brevity... x