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To boiling point



Your mouth
within my soul ~
                           burning.

Heated words
upturned
into flames of purpose


I'm overdone...

Author notes

prompt ~ Pressure Cooker

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  • marlene47 silver member
    April 16, 2008
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    I like every line... especially the burning mouth and flames of purpose.
    Marlene


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    It's amazing how we can say so much more when restricted by the word count. You left so many provocative thoughts flowing through these lines.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Margaret


  • crimsondew
    April 16, 2008
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    Love your last line..All the best!