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Vapers element

vale of tears tightens
as your vapor pours.

Combusted evaporation
expiring emotions
from your heart

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quickie 15 words promt pressure cooker

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  • Carly Pop gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Really good words!! thanks for entering!!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    Excellent 15 word take on the prompt!!
    Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!