Welcome,
Come on in and take a seat,
Let me show you every time you made my heart skip a beat.
Images of our moments together flashed all around,
Each one had lots of laughters in the background.
Remember when you kept starring into my eyes,
It brought to my lips,lots of smiles.
Watching you as we go down the road in your car,
Thinking of how wonderful you really are!!
The moment we made love for the first time,
That memory is carved upon a wall here in another room of mine.
Come, let me show you how happy you make me,
Into another room we go so you may see.
All these images you see before you have all been the greatest moments for me,
But here in this last room is the one I keep hidden for no one to see.
A place where there's only pieces of my heart scattered on the floor,
From having it broken over and over; for you I almost opened that door...
Instead in the end you made me put the walls around it even stronger with the hurt you have given,
Now because of you it stays forbidden.
Come on in and take a seat and welcome to my heart,
Never mind,there's nothing left someone tore it all apart...
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice
Hope this isn't true as it was a sad piece.Good write. -
Great!!!
Good write, Like how you used a poem about inviting someone inside your heart, that is different. Your rhyme was really good..and flowed nicely. And of course im big on endings and I think it was perfect!!!
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Wow, a heartbreaking write this
and I find your theme to this, original!
It didn't strike me to write about someone visiting my heart as if it was a humble abode of mine!
Also, the rhymes didn't look force here
and the words you've written are pretty much beautiful ^^
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