Whisper while I
Drift across
the deep blue swells
Crawling under the big blue blanket
To try
And listen to your heart
beat
and beat
and beat
The drums play loud
Napping on the porch in the open air
Sunshine on your pretty face
Under that wind jumping red hair
I look at you
Heart dancing to the beat
the beat
the beat
Sunshine on my sunshine
Sky's eye or rain
I just want you to be mine
And I'll
be yours
be yours
be yours
Rain
Clouds
Got no reason to be afraid
They're just playing
loud
Raindrops falling like they're being paid
Tapping on the roof to strike up a beat
We'll follow the line at the edge of the sea
Take
my hand
my sunshine
Dancing in the rain is how love's made
Sunshine on my sunshine
Sky's eye or rain
I just want
You to be mine
And I'll
be yours
be yours
be yours
A contest entry
- Write me a song by insearchofsweetness.
1750 points, ended April 27, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Can't sing? Can write? Enter your songs here! by upperworld06.
700 points, ended March 23, 71 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i really like this song a lot, i can definatly hear it as a dance song for some reason, i love it, best of luck in the contest
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yeah i saw this with guitar too, this line was my favorit- Raindrops falling like they're being paid
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I enjoyed these lyrics...
you could hear a piano and soft guitar perhaps with it.
well done, perhaps a bit of Marc Cohn in you?
ears/Seattle
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I absolutely love it! Something about the repeated words works out really nicely too.
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I like this great song
<3 and good luck in the contest I hope you win ^^
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