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Steamed

Fiery words

boil heart,

stew simmers,

either serving love

or hate,

depending

on heat source.

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Prompt - Pressure Cooker

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  • thepoetssoul
    April 17, 2008

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    Wonderfully done on the prompt.
    Splendid imagery and word usage
    You weaved a exellent piece here.
    Thanks for sharing you talent

    Tony


  • marlene47 silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    I like the progression from words to hurt feelings to simmering. Funny how anger is related to cooking.
    Marlene


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    WOW--Love the last 4 lines---Excellent Message!
    Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!


  • PatheticKt
    April 16, 2008

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    There's definitely an in depth meaning
    to the lines you've written here ^^
    Great take on the prompt
    since your point of view on a pressure cooker
    is unique, indeed n.n


  • crimsondew
    April 16, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Nice dimension on the prompt..all theb est!


  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    April 16, 2008

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    Wow this is so true! i completely agree with you. and u said it all in only seven lines...amazing. well done my friend

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