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Dancer

My pencil scratches

the eraser rubbs

this is how the drawings are dubbed

by sloshing and twisting the lead makes a line

soon to be made into a dancer sublime

i know she is not

but to me she is real

her dancers steps lithe

the music genteel

as these lines stop and the shapes cease

Her notes and music will be her release

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  • sirjokesalot
    April 22, 2008

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    NIce

    Great job, bringing two totally different subject together and making them make sense, that's talent, a creative mind.