Hoping and praying with chills up my spine
I feel you are with me for the very last time
as you turn to walk I grabbed your hands
'please don't leave me' i said but you left me where I stand
tears on my cheeks and a spear through my heart
your truck leaves forever and yet i thought we would never part
I gave you everything
nothing left here but me
my heart has gone with you
but that is something you will not see
lacking the words
fearful of your reprimise
you proved to me you were just another of those guys
I ly here in bed watching the phone,
smelling the sweater that still bore your cologne
I know you have gone
but I cannot make myself see
you never really loved me
never saw me for me
A contest entry
- When we fell in love.. by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you are sketching the emotions in the words of deep poetry here..and I can agree that the matter of the hearts are always touching..well done...
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Good,flows,sweetly warming
I thought that it was very interesting and true as to what it says but only if this were a scary type on nightmare. -
Oh I love to read this poem, reminds me of my first love she loved the smell of my Polo cologne. I call this poem ode to my high school sweet heart. Bravo Bravo
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You're welcome. Thank you for yours. I like how you write. Everything is so complete.
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Very sad and depressing. i could really feel the pain in which you expressed so extravigantly. very well done my friend.
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